When me and my partner first started thinking about topics to write about we were having a difficult time. We didn't want to choose a boring topic so we picked a popular topic of breaking up with your boyfriend or girlfriend.This was a good choice i though because its a very popular topic for the high school stage in most peoples lives. Most topics we included in the paper were very easy to explain and give examples. One of the ways we explained was how to break up with your boyfriend/girlfriend over a picture. This method was very hard to explain because we couldn't imagine anyone going through with this method. It was a hard method to explain. The only thing that was recommended to us to edit was to add more methods. We used alot of basic methods that alot of people use because there so popular but thinking of new ways is something we could add in the future. Also in the Picture method there was only one example. Maybe if we though about it a little harder we could add more examples on how to use this method.
What i liked a lot about our paper is the way we give you in our examples on what to say in possible situations. We didn't make up these situations, my partner and i have either gone through this or heard about it.
The best option:
§ “I thought we had something, but it’s not going to work out. We should still be friends.”
This is the texting method. In every method we gave an option that we thought what was best for you and your partner once going through this method for your breakup.
Hi Tim,
ReplyDeleteI would make the same suggestions here:
1. Add draft
2. Clean up the reflection and fix your spelling/grammar errors.
3. Don't forget to revise the titles of your blog entries.
Basko