original conclusion- All seven deadly sins are committed on a baseball field. There are many different ways players can express the sins on the field before, during or after the game. Most of the positive sins take place on a baseball field but sometimes it gets real competitive and aggravating for some players.
New Conclusion- A baseball field is a great example for a place where the deadly sins take place. Many different ways a player can act can give an example of any sin. Sometimes competition gets the best of players who show examples of negative sins. All deadly sins take place on a baseball field.
New Conclusion- Where do you think the deadly sins take place? Almost all sins can take place anywhere thats why i used a place i loved to be. On a baseball field either during practice or during a game all the deadly sins can take place. They also might not only take place on the field but in the stands as well with the fans watching the game. A baseball field is a great example of a place were the deadly sins take place.
New Conclusion- There are many different ways a player can express the sins during a baseball game. There are many positive sins taking place between teammates but sometimes the competition comes between us which brings out the negative sins in us. All seven deadly sins are committed on a baseball field
Hi Tim,
ReplyDeleteIt was great working with you this semester! I'm so glad that you stuck with it and I do hope that you enjoyed the class. Thanks for listening to what I had to say and please know that I'm so happy to have met you.
I can see that you made some improvements to the reflections here. Thanks so much for taking the time to do this. You forgot to do the letter to the reader at the end. But the good news is that you are done! Congratulations and please stop by to visit if you are nearby!
Good luck with the rest of the year and beyond!
Ms. Basko